issue51:mon_opinion_p._28
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issue51:mon_opinion_p._28 [2011/08/01 11:22] – créée auntiee | issue51:mon_opinion_p._28 [2011/09/05 00:38] (Version actuelle) – bahoui | ||
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- | Have you ever sat there, thinking "I wish I could write?" | + | **Have you ever sat there, thinking "I wish I could write?" |
But you can write something. An opinion? Opinions are good. We all have them. Done something technical? What about a how-to, or a review? Maybe a poem? A haiku in response to Eric Schmidt? Go ahead, learn a new art-form. | But you can write something. An opinion? Opinions are good. We all have them. Done something technical? What about a how-to, or a review? Maybe a poem? A haiku in response to Eric Schmidt? Go ahead, learn a new art-form. | ||
- | I write a lot of words, and I confess I have followed the rules and I have failed. Also, I have thrown away the rules and I have failed. That's why we have editors. | + | I write a lot of words, and I confess I have followed the rules and I have failed. Also, I have thrown away the rules and I have failed. That's why we have editors.** |
- | I can give you lists of attributes of good writing: | + | N' |
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+ | Mais vous pouvez écrire quelque chose. Une opinion ? Les opinions sont bien. Nous en avons tous. Avez-vous fait quelque chose de technique ? Pourquoi pas un tutoriel ou une critique ? Peut-être un poème. Un « haïku » en réponse à Eric Schmidt ? [Ndt : il ne s'agit pas de l' | ||
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+ | **I can give you lists of attributes of good writing: | ||
• Clarity | • Clarity | ||
• Accuracy | • Accuracy | ||
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• Concision | • Concision | ||
• Transparency | • Transparency | ||
- | • Consistency | + | • Consistency** |
- | I can give you list upon list of rules for writing most kinds of text. You know the kind of thing I mean: | + | Je peux vous énumérer les caractéristiques d'une bonne expression écrite : |
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+ | • la clarté ; | ||
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+ | • l' | ||
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+ | • la pertinence ; | ||
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+ | • la sincérité (Souvenez-vous, | ||
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+ | • la concision ; | ||
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+ | • la transparence ; | ||
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+ | • la cohérence. | ||
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+ | **I can give you list upon list of rules for writing most kinds of text. You know the kind of thing I mean: | ||
• Put the reader first. | • Put the reader first. | ||
• Be clear. | • Be clear. | ||
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• Use short paragraphs. | • Use short paragraphs. | ||
• Never use a long word when a short one will do. | • Never use a long word when a short one will do. | ||
- | • Edit thoroughly; cut, cut, cut | + | • Edit thoroughly; cut, cut, cut ** |
- | I know it's difficult. Web readers have a short attention span, and you just can't show off the extent of your vocabulary, given our readership is trans-national. That doesn' | + | Je peux vous donner des listes et des listes de règles à suivre lorsque vous écrivez la plupart de types de texte. Vous savez ce dont je parle : |
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+ | • c'est le lecteur qui doit primer ; | ||
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+ | • soyez clair ; | ||
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+ | • soyez précis ; | ||
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+ | • allez droit au but ; ensuite, arrêtez ; | ||
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+ | • exprimez une idée à la fois ; | ||
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+ | • utilisez de courtes clauses ; | ||
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+ | • utilisez des phrases courtes; | ||
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+ | • utilisez des paragraphes courts ; | ||
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+ | • n' | ||
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+ | • éditez minutieusement ; éliminez, éliminez, éliminez. | ||
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+ | **I know it's difficult. Web readers have a short attention span, and you just can't show off the extent of your vocabulary, given our readership is trans-national. That doesn' | ||
I mark my own papers these days: 'must try harder' | I mark my own papers these days: 'must try harder' | ||
- | Why don't you give it a go? Any subject will do. Go ahead, write something. Write anything. | + | Why don't you give it a go? Any subject will do. Go ahead, write something. Write anything.** |
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+ | Je sais que c'est difficile. Les lecteurs en ligne ont de faibles possibilités de concentration et vous ne pouvez pas mettre l' | ||
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+ | Ces jours-ci, je corrige mes propres articles d'un « doit faire plus d' | ||
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+ | Pourquoi ne pas essayer ? N' | ||
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+ | Dessin : | ||
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+ | **I know it's against everything I stand for. I hate myself for doing it. | ||
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+ | But I need it. | ||
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+ | I need an iPod Touch.** | ||
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+ | Je sais que c'est contraire à tout ce que je représente. Je me déteste de le faire. | ||
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+ | Mais j'en ai besoin. | ||
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+ | J'ai besoin d'un iPod Touch. | ||
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